She sat at the green laminate table and
pulled her sweater closer around her in an attempt to keep the cold of
the rain from creeping in under the poorly caulked window of the
Chinese restaurant. The dining room was nearly empty. Two teenagers
sat in the far corner table. The remains of pork fried rice sprinkled around them, testament to their lack of finesse with
chopsticks. An older Asian couple sat together in the center of the
room; the owners she guessed. Three large metal bowls sat in front of
them. Two of the bowls were filled with steamed rice. The third was
full to the top with what looked like fried fish bones. They picked
morsels from the fish, scooped a bit of rice and tucked the food into
their mouths while chattering in their mother tongue. The room was
quiet and sedate. There was no music only the gentle tapping of rain
on the windows. The lights were dim for atmosphere or because of
grease, she didn't know and didn't care. She was the only other guest
in the room and she relished the solitude.
By contrast, the kitchen, as viewed
through a wide open doorway behind the counter, was a carnival.
Flames lept in the air to the tune of sizzling vegetables. The young
girl at the counter barked instruction at the men standing at the
grill. When they failed to move quickly enough the girl jumped from
her chair and took a spot at one of the large woks.
She watched, fascinated by the
choreography, wondering which would be her order.
Hot and Sour soup, fried dumplings,
sa-cha chicken.
Her stomach growled and she smiled to
herself as she tried to remember the first time.
There had been no Chinese restaurants
growing up. Oh, there were, just none that her family would have
eaten at. Back then the most exotic Chinese food was Chung King from
a can with those crispy noodles that tasted better alone than with
the beefy chowmein over them. There had been sweet and sour pork,
made in eighth grade home-ec class and then recreated at home. There
was a take out place in college...but the first real Chinese restaurant...
She closed her eyes and looked back
into the past. There was a place they use to go to...way up north of
the city. And that buffet with the roaches...She could recall the
decor of sea shell pictures of birds and autographed celebrity
photos. The hot peppers their friend had eaten whole and the plum
wine a server had given them free of charge all because they looked
so happy. But she could not, no matter how hard she tried, remember
the food. It was as if hot and sour soup and fried dumplings were an innate part of her.
"Excuse me! Excuse me!" the
young girl at the counter nodded towards her table. "Miss?"
And as she looked up from the past the girl motioned towards a bag on
the counter.
"Oh, thank you!" she replied
and pulling her sweater closer, leaving the past behind, she walked
to the counter, picked up the bag. She paused at the table of
condiments, studying the packets of sweet and sour sauce and tiny
envelopes of red hot pepper.
The door opened and a whip of cool,
damp, late autumn air pushed in. A man followed. He carried a similar
bag, plopping it on the counter. No one noticed except the counter
girl. He spoke quietly to her, handing her his receipt. The girl
studied it and pushed it back into his hand.
"No. Order is correct." The girl sat back on her stool, crossing her arms across her chest.
"But it isn't. These dumplings are
soft. Not...crispy..." he rubbed his fingers in the air in a
poor attempt at pantomime texture.
"No. You order steamed. You get
steamed." The girl held her ground.
"But I wanted crispy." He
sighed in defeat.
She turned, bag in hand. "You
still do it wrong.You always wanted
fried but you always ordered steamed."
He tipped his head at the sound of her
voice. A smile played at one side of his mouth. "You have fried,
don't you."
She nodded.
"Want to trade?" he lifted
his eyebrows in a cartoon manner.
"You mean like I did, over and
over for four years?" She lifted her eyebrows as well. "No,
I do not wish to trade." She felt a brief moment of victory as
his shoulders, his smile and his eyebrows fell. But the moment was
the briefest of brief and the memory of those many nights at that
other Chinese place came back. "Place another order. We can
share mine until yours are ready."
He smiled then. That smile from so many
years ago; the smile that made her feel lost.
"So, you want more dumpling?"
The girl at the counter tapped her pencil on a menu, ready to circle
his order before barking it to the men in the back. "You want
right ones this time?"
"Yes. I want the right one...this
time." He smiled that smile again, looking down at his shoes for
a second before taking the few steps down the counter to where she
stood at the condiment table. He said nothing else, just placed his
hands on either side of her face and kissed her.
And she didn't feel lost at all.
This is a work of fiction, although the restaurant described are ones I hold fond memories of. The story was inspired by my current favorite Chinese place, as I waited for my order one night and tried to remember the very first time I ate at a Chinese restaurant. I honestly can't remember the first one. But I do remember my favorites.
And it is a stretch...but the title does begin with 'U'. And there are numerous 'u's throughout. Six in this very paragraph...
I liked it a lot! It conjures up some great memories of Chinese Food eating through out life!
ReplyDeleteThanks Haralee. We use to go out for Chinese a lot when the kids were little because they loved the buffet. Now it seems we only do carry-out...
DeleteGreat story, now I want some Chinese!
ReplyDeleteAnd then in an hour you will need another story...lol!
Delete(thanks!!)